Wrekt said:
I've been trying to finish this for over a month. I was told to pick up the series while I wait for A Dance With Dragons but I've never had as much trouble following a book as I do with this one. It switches between characters so often that I simply stopped caring about the entire cast. I'm about 75 pages away from the end so I'll finish it but I can't see myself continuing the series.
I finished my second reading of the four A Song of Ice and Fire books a while back and decided to pick this up after hearing so many people compare it to Martin's work. I made it about 100 pages in before shelving it for now. The story just seems so bland and honestly immature compared to anything in ASoIAF. The book seriously reads like some kid's nerd fantasy RPG campaign. Although I was thoroughly confused due to lack of explanation, I still enjoyed the prologue and the first chapter that primarily dealt with Ganoes Paran. It was the second chapter that really made me decide that this series probably isn't for me.
The way magic was so poorly explained (I swear everything is ambiguously described as 'waves of sorcery') and how prominent it was just came of as extremely awkward to me. This particular passage had me almost drop the book as soon as I read it:
"She watched as a Kenryll'ah demon arose beneath Nightchill. Laughing shrilly, the towering gaunt creature tore Nightchill limb from limb. It had begun feeding by the time Bellurdan arrived. The Thelomen bellowed as the demon raked its knife-like talons against his chest. Ignoring the wounds and blood that sprayed from them, he closed his hands around the demon's head and crushed it."
Do people actually enjoy this kind of crap? The above passage occurred completely out of nowhere. At this point the reader still has no idea how magic works, the above Nightchill and Bellurdan characters were just introduced a few paragraphs ago, and this is the first mention that demons even exist in this universe. Honestly, it seems like stuff just happens randomly in this book as Erikson just makes shit up on the fly as if he was some improvising dungeon master of a D&D campaign. I finished the chapter, but if some of the Amazon.com reviews are to be believed, the rest of the book and a great deal of this series is very similar where shit just happens completely randomly and without explanation.
I don't hate Erikson's writing style, but it seemed like he was constantly using a thesaurus to throw in "big words" where they didn't necessarily belong. Maybe I'm just stupid, but I found myself re-reading a ton of his sentences just to understand what he was trying to convey. There were some excellently written passages in the parts that I read, but they were definitely in the minority. Anyway, I may give Erikson a try again some day, but I definitely didn't go away with a good impression and I have no idea how people compare him to Martin's writing.
Longing for some good fantasy, I then searched for some more recommendations and picked up Raymond E. Feist's "Magician: Apprentice" novel. I read the first couple of chapters and really enjoyed the writing although I could tell that this is a very run-of-the-mill fantasy universe. I was looking for something a little more "grounded" like GRRM's books, so I went back to some of the NeoGAF recommendation threads and decided on Joe Abercrombie's "The Blade Itself".
I'm really glad I did as I am really enjoying this book. I'm only about 60 pages in, but this is definitely what I was looking for. Excellent prose, ridden with humor, and very gritty without too many unbelievable and fantastic elements. I will definitely be finishing this book and picking up the rest of the trilogy. The writing is really excellent in this novel and I find it hard to believe that this is Abercrombie's debut work.